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Thursday, 20 August 2020

Writing Week 5

Hello and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we had to finsh off our speechs. I am going to share with you one of my favourite paragraphs from my speech. My speech is on zero hunger. Here is my favourite paragraph: 

I think it's time we do something before it's too late. Shouldn’t we be worried about what will happen if we don’t do anything? We can’t rely on others to do it. I hope that everyone will have food by 2030 and that people will not come home to empty cupboards. We may not be able to completely stop zero hunger but we do have voice so let's work together and make a change. Pope Francis once said “Throwing away food is like stealing from the table of those who are poor and hungry” 

What do you think of this parargraph?, Any feedback on it? 

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