Perfect poem

Lats week for writing we had to create poems. We could pick from 4 different poems. I chose to do a haiku. I did one about dance. Here it is: 

Have you ever done a Haiku? 

Poem!!!!

This week for writing the goals were: selects words and phrases to enhance meaning and/or mood.

Revise and rework writing for clarity, impact and purpose. We had to create a poem about Ōtautahi. Here is my poem: 

What are your favourite kind of poems? 

Writing Week 5

Hello and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we had to finsh off our speechs. I am going to share with you one of my favourite paragraphs from my speech. My speech is on zero hunger. Here is my favourite paragraph: 

I think it's time we do something before it's too late. Shouldn’t we be worried about what will happen if we don’t do anything? We can’t rely on others to do it. I hope that everyone will have food by 2030 and that people will not come home to empty cupboards. We may not be able to completely stop zero hunger but we do have voice so let's work together and make a change. Pope Francis once said “Throwing away food is like stealing from the table of those who are poor and hungry” 

What do you think of this parargraph?, Any feedback on it? 

Writing T3 W3 & W4

Hello and welcome back. For Writing the goals were Understand the purposes for writing and how to achieve those purposes. Select and explore significant ideas, developing main points with specific detail.

We had to pick a topic to do our speech on. I chose zero hunger. Here is some of my writing:

According to the U.N 821 million people are hungry globally. That's right 821 million people! Next time you throw out food, think about how much you're wasting . Other people need this food. Rapid change needs to happen fast because around 9 million people have already died of starvation. Have you ever thrown away perfectly fine food? Yes most people probably have. So we need to stop now.   

What do you think of my writing?

Writing T3 W2

Hello and welcome back to my blog. For writing the we focused on the fantastics. We had to write some of Hansel and Greatel using dialoge, complex sentences and eg. 

Here is some of the story that I wrote:

Writing Task

What was your favourite sentence? 

Writing Week 5

Hello and welcome back to my blog. (I don't know why this hasn't posted) For writing we were  focusing on narrative writing. Our task was to use one of the four different images on Pobble 365 and write a narrative from there. I choose one about a mirror. So I wrote a narrative based on what I thought from looking at the picture. Here is the link to my short story:

My short story

What was your favourite word I used in my short story?

Writing Task W10

Hello and welcome to my blog. This week for writing our goal is use language features specific to the purpose of the text. We had to write a short strory including a personification, onomatopoeia and metaphor. Here is the link to my almost done story:

Short Story

What was your favourite figurative language I used? 

 

Writing W9

Hello and welcome back to my blog. This week for Writing our goal is use complex sentences that are grammatically correct. We had to create a DLO showing our understanding of complex sentences. I did a news report and some other sentences with Eilish. Here is my DLO: 

What was your favourite video?

Writing task W8

Hello and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we have been doing narrative writing. Firstly we had to select a way to write our story. I chose to do the one abut going on unexplained journey. The we had to make a plan using a template the teachers created for us. Then it was time to write our story trying to stay on track with our plan. Here is the link to my plan and story: 

Plan

Story

Do you think I stayed on track with my plan? 

Writing Week 7

Hello and welcome back. This week for writing our goal is Use "show not tell" when appropriate. We had to right a paragraph using show not tell sentences. The sentences hillighted are the ones that I used show not tell. Here is the link to mine:

Paragraph 

What was your favourite sentence? 

Writing task Week 4

Hello welcome this week for writing our goal is to Select words and phrases to enhance meaning and/or mood and confidently shape ideas for effect. We had to create a diamante poem and another kinda poem. I did a haiku. We then had to pick a word that we thought stood out in one of our poems. Mine is highlighted on my haiku. Here is my poems:

What is your favourite kinda poem to write?

Writing task Week 3

Hello and welcome back. Last week for writing our goal was Spell high-frequency and some difficult words correctly drwaing on knowledge of how words work. We had to create a poster showing some rules and examples of contractions, Y endings and the K sound. Here is my poster:


What rule did you learn?

Writing Task Week 2

Hi and welcome back. This week in writing our goal was Revise and rework writing for clarity, impact and purpose, proofread for spelling, grammer and punctuation. We were asked to write 3 rules that we thought were important. Here is the rules I thought were important:

What do you think was the most important rule?

Writing task

This week for writing our goal was Attempt more complex punctuation. We had to fix some sentences in our New Zealander report. Here is the sentences I fixed:

What was your favourite sentence I fixed? 

Writing task

This week for Writing our Goal was Understand the purposes for writing and how to achieve those purposes. We had to find the main idea and the supporting detail about a New Zealander. He is my work. 

Have you used this before? 

Writing Task

This week for writing our goal was Use a variety of sentences structures, beginnings and lengths to give effect. We had write a set of instructions and then take out the linking words and test a buddy. Here is my poster that my buddy filled in. 

Have you used linking word before?