What was your favourite sentence I fixed?
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wednesday, 15 April 2020
Writing task
This week for writing our goal was Attempt more complex punctuation. We had to fix some sentences in our New Zealander report. Here is the sentences I fixed:
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Beth
ReplyDeleteNice work. I really like the connection you have made with the news rules we have to live with. How have you found these rules? have you been able to keep busy?
Steve
Hi Steve
DeleteThank you. I watched lots of videos to find these rules. Yes I have been able to keep busy. How about you? :)